Monday Prompt-Animals/Animal Studies--If I could Pat You Without Fear
If I Could Pat You Without Fear Our search light moves with the slow Bolero on either side. We sieve the night to pick out pairs of color lights green yellow orange fiery red ,dull chocolate but the...
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There are some fabulous images here! The owl like a vase (exactly!) and oh, the Rubiks cube of animal names. . . . You mean Rubik's, right? Sivakami, I'll come back to this one a little later. I must...
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and sometimes feel that we invade their privacy.
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Sivakami, I love your response to Toni. The poem, though, was too long-lined for me (today, for now) I'm in a short-line space. So I'll try again later. XXX Judy
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Judy This is a travel poem and hence the long winding lines like the mud pathway,curving and going forward.I used to think that it spreads all over the page,and I have not succeeded in cutting it...
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Siva, I said I would come back to this one. I'm sorry that it has taken me so long. The question in the last line leaves me smiling, for sure. I'm usually partial to short poems and shorter lines....
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Toni Why talk about animalistic to animals?Besides we have minimalistic poetry with only a few bare lines,so can we not have minimalistic sound ? And thanks.The trimming I shall keep in my mind and do...
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Siva, Jude said she was going to clear away everything up to February 1st (in her note of March 16, posted at the top of this Forum). She'll make another announcement when she's going to clean...
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Toni Thank you.But he looks very small in this. Sivakami
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